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 <p>a computer club is where a group of people hang out and do computer together</p>
 
 <h2>WHAT IS "DOING COMPUTER"?</h2>
-<p>doing computer is whatever you want...on computers, together. our bias is towards programming and diy shared computing infrastructure. but there's also art and music and rad data science and circuit-bending and a million other things we don't know about</p>
+<p>doing computer is whatever you want...on computers, together. our bias is towards programming and diy shared computing infrastructure. but there's also art and music and open data science and circuit-bending and a million other things we don't know about</p>
 
 <h2>WHY SHOULD I START A COMPUTER CLUB?</h2>
 <p>the political economy of computing is awful. have you read <a href="https://bookwyrm.social/book/525851/s/palo-alto">palo alto</a>? me neither. we should read it. we deserve better than the darpa-funded visions of xerox parc</p>
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     <li>does your city have a food coop? food coops and computer clubs have a similar ethos; and food coops are a great place to get your food for the same reasons that a computer club is a great place to do computer. make friends at your food coop and find the computer-doers</li>
     <li>join a project or start a project and talk to people there about starting a computer club. are you or someone you know doing<ul>
         <li>web design for a diy venue? work together!</li>
-        <li>technical support for a rad local project? work together!</li>
+        <li>technical support for a cool local project? work together!</li>
         <li>communications for your neighborhood's nascent mesh network? work together!</li>
         <li>working on local open data projects? work together!</li>
     </ul></li>